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Lightning won't matter
To the man who'll doubt
The idea of true love at first sight:
Because lightning won't matter
To the man who'll not part
In haste, the entirety of his heart.
Because lightning won't matter
To the man who'll listen
For the lady who speaks when her soul glistens.
Because lightning won't matter
To the man who'll caress
A body he knows will never perish.
Because lightning won't matter
To the man who'll ingest
Her serene and pure, mind-soothing breath.
The view of a lady
Cannot change his mind,
Because lightning won't matter
To the man who is blind.
To the man who'll doubt
The idea of true love at first sight:
Because lightning won't matter
To the man who'll not part
In haste, the entirety of his heart.
Because lightning won't matter
To the man who'll listen
For the lady who speaks when her soul glistens.
Because lightning won't matter
To the man who'll caress
A body he knows will never perish.
Because lightning won't matter
To the man who'll ingest
Her serene and pure, mind-soothing breath.
The view of a lady
Cannot change his mind,
Because lightning won't matter
To the man who is blind.
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i'd do anything to be with you
i cannot eat my cereal because my tears, too thick,
are ruining the flavour... with a "u", because all i want is...
you are perfect for me. okay ? motherfucking perfect.
my missing piece, my truelove, the one i'd do anything
for. now i am listening to all the songs that make me
think of you, just trying to hold on. i know you think
that i deserve better, but no... i don't even deserve you.
i don't deserve your heart. but here, take mine anyway.
if i can't have you, i don't want anyone. i would feel like
i were cheating.
please don't tell me it's not my fault.
i don't want to sounds obsessed, but
i would rather have no life th
Literature
Alone in the Dark
I'm sitting here
All alone
Waiting for someone
To call me home
I want them to notice
That I am not there
I need to know
That somebody cares
Out here in the dark
I'm in need of a friend
Someone that will be
With me till the end
My body is shivering
My fingers are numb
All I want is
For someone to come
I need to feel loved
My heart hurts right now
I need someone
To help me somehow
Life is so lonely
When friends seem so few
I want to be happy
But I don't know how to
I've been depressed for so long
And lonely and scared
To be anything else
I'm still unprepared
So please help me out
Dear friend of mine
If you don't he
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Burden
I feel one thing which makes me....
....Undergo some kind of pressure.
I know that everybody round me....
....They see that I had changed.
I deemed it not important, though....
....Inside my soul there was a worry.
Besides, it really makes me nervous....
....And closed for colleagues and friends.
It may be something in the air, or....
....May just be the weather problems.
It's like a fever, or sometimes....
....It's like a fire burning from inside.
So, I can feel it like a burden....
....Which meaning I can't understand.
But I don't even want to know it....
....I want this feeling just to disappear.
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October 19, 2010
Christopher Michael Speciale
They say love hits you like lightning.
What if you can't see? How do you find love?
The blind man knows...
It's not really a villanelle. I thought that if it were a real villanelle then it would ruin the ending in some way (cause I couldn't think of any other way to write it.) So it's in the right stanza-form, just not the right line-form (if that makes any sense).
Anyway, I hope you enjoyed it! 
For Critique: This deviation is just another one of my romantic bits, I write a lot of those. But this one, I feel particularly accomplished of because of... *sigh* I can never really explain why. I guess it's b/c of the way I wrote it--it's different than how I write a lot of my poetry. Anyway, what I'm asking for in a critique is if it actually brings about any emotions in you, any at all, and how powerful the poem forces them out.
© 2010 Christopher Michael Speciale
Christopher Michael Speciale
They say love hits you like lightning.
What if you can't see? How do you find love?
The blind man knows...
It's not really a villanelle. I thought that if it were a real villanelle then it would ruin the ending in some way (cause I couldn't think of any other way to write it.) So it's in the right stanza-form, just not the right line-form (if that makes any sense).
Anyway, I hope you enjoyed it! For Critique: This deviation is just another one of my romantic bits, I write a lot of those. But this one, I feel particularly accomplished of because of... *sigh* I can never really explain why. I guess it's b/c of the way I wrote it--it's different than how I write a lot of my poetry. Anyway, what I'm asking for in a critique is if it actually brings about any emotions in you, any at all, and how powerful the poem forces them out.
© 2010 Christopher Michael Speciale
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You're a very inspiring writer. I really love your work; each piece has a true voice of its own. Please don't give up writing, it would be such a waste of your amazing way with words. 